Roleplaying keeps
McKayla safe, keeps her feelings and her emotions in check. All she can
think of is the next scene and feeling the man of her dreams giving her
the pleasure she craves. She knows, as he does that no matter who holds
the crop, no matter who is tied up, no matter what role they are
playing, Kurt is the true Alpha, the true Dom to her submissive side.
She knows one word from him, her mind instantly melts and awaits his
direction.
But she fears her relationship with Kurt is slipping away, because she can’t give him what he really wants. And his long absences for work give her too much time between scenes to fixate on what that is: love. For her to say it. She shows it; she’s damn good at showing it whenever they spend time together. Still, if she says it, everything between them will change forever. If she doesn’t, soon, she may just lose him.
But she fears her relationship with Kurt is slipping away, because she can’t give him what he really wants. And his long absences for work give her too much time between scenes to fixate on what that is: love. For her to say it. She shows it; she’s damn good at showing it whenever they spend time together. Still, if she says it, everything between them will change forever. If she doesn’t, soon, she may just lose him.
Hot
Pink Crop
is the sequel to Hot Pink Condom and
gave me the chance to catch up with my favorite roleplaying couple, McKayla and
Kurt. This time around the roleplaying is a bit more elaborate and the novella
encompasses a couple of days over a week’s time. It also features McKayla in
the driver’s seat so to speak as she plays the Domme to Kurt’s sub. While I
don’t typically go in for femdom books, I found myself enjoying the story, most
likely because it was role-play and not the normal nature of their
relationship. It gave me the chance to learn more about both McKayla and Kurt
and the scenes were hot!
As much as I enjoyed it, I did find
myself a bit baffled by McKayla’s thoughts at one point in the novella. Towards
the end of their scene (almost 90% into the book), she looks into his eyes and
sees his love for her and freaks out. She starts worrying because she’s
realized that she love him back and is concerned that her feelings have crossed
a line they drew when they began their relationship five years earlier. What
baffled me about her line of thought is that Kurt has already said “I love you”
more than once and she spent the first part of the book afraid she was losing
him because she couldn’t say it back as she refused to acknowledge that she
felt that way. So she went from refusing to acknowledge her feelings, to being
afraid she would lose him because she couldn’t say it, to being scared that
he’d leave her now that she realized she loved him. Mind you, she still can’t
say the words, but can you see why McKayla left me with a bad case of whiplash?
But despite that minor blip in
McKayla’s character, I really enjoyed Hot
Pink Crop… until I got to the end and Ms. Montgomery left me teetering at
the edge of the cliff. It’s not quite a cliffhanger, but I was really hoping
for more resolution to their relationship in this installment rather than
ending the book with them on even shakier ground than when it started. On the
upside, this means I get to read at least one more book in the series, insuring
another peek into my favorite roleplaying duo’s steamy scenes.
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